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Stories of Old

April 2004


The Mountain's Secret
My Profile

Name: Marie
aka: CityKat
aka: Bubbles
Age: 18 - eek! I'm old...
Birthday: December 13
Zodiac: Sagittarius
Location: The box that is campus.
Loves: RH;MIT, music, friends, the outdoors, all of my hometowns, critters, WAGGGS


Fellow Tin Soldiers
Blog Links

Chicken Soup For The Souless -What goes on in Jesse's brain, nobody knows...
In ThE Tub WiTh SquIsHy -Christina's log, so just keep swimming!.
Lean On Me -Regan's digital and cryonable shoulder.
Manitoulin Wannabe -The heart of the island's where her heart lies.
One Ring... -Ali's blog. Her straight forward is kinda crooked.
Random Thoughts -It’s Jeff! And the voices!.
Searching in the Darkness -Lex's blog, we'll force him to see dawn one of these days.
Somewhere Over the Rainbow -It’s Kuriosity!
Super Spidey -A cookie and a kiss.
The World of Cr0magnus -Tech Reincarnated
Undead and Confused -My favourite Cool Kid!


Moutains and Valleys
Fun Links

Chris's Site -Games, Pics, Jokes... He's got it. And BESS can't get him.
F-Concept! Oi!Oi!Oi! -Leader's only!... okay, and Josh and Bubble!
havesomehats -All I'm saying is; elephants, checkered people, and top hats.
Sinfest -Funny as Hell. Thanks to Lex for getting me hooked.
Too Far North (Awesome)!! -The best band there ever was! (Okay, that might be stetching it, but hey we love you guys!) It consists of a lack of independant brain power and a collective love for music!
Blog Shares -Who's winning today?


Beacon of Hope

When the sun sets and nothing lights the way, 
This window holds a candle light, 
To shine until the coming of day. 
 
When the sun no longer shines, 
This candle lights the road, 
And never goes out until another lights the way. 
 
When the sun no longer protects its children, 
This candle represents hope, 
With the moon and the stars there, to light the road ahead, it lay. 
 
And when the sun makes its entrance, 
This candle takes a break, 
To rest until the road has no one to light the way.


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oopsie?

the repetition og the "when the sun..." and "this candle..." really pulls the whole poem together. my only request/suggestion of change, is fix your grammer.
third stanza: "...protects its children"
fourth stanza: "...makes its entrance"