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To Jocelyn 
 
Oh fair maiden 
You make me stary eyed 
And when I'm alone at night 
Off in the bathroom I hide 
 
Your eyes are like chocolate 
Your hair like pasta 
Dammit I'm hungry 
Fuck this I'm going to the kitchen 
(...) 
When I look into your eyes  
I see a thousand things (all beauty) 
Then I see your ass 
Then that's all I see 
 
Your lips are like soft pillows  
Which I love to kiss more than the rest 
They're taught and firm and... 
No wait that's your breasts 
 
I love you in the morning 
And in the back of my car 
And you're not just great at fucking 
You're my shining star 
 
-Grissom 
 
Oh you gotta just love Alex, and her love poem, which I made here write for me in writer's craft. Anyone else up to the challenge of writing me one? Lol, I'd love to hear them.

last modified Feb 21, 2005 at 14:47



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I could tell it was Nursall's. She spelled *taut* wrong. And *starry*.

I had one which was a little more deep... but uh, I tore it up...

137516 | posted by anon:Jesse on February 21, 2005 at 20:06

lmao

that was uber

137501 | posted by anon:seline on February 21, 2005 at 16:00